Sunday, March 10, 2013

Ernest Hemingway, A Clean, Well- Lighted Place (Reading Reaction)


          The first time I read something by Hemingway, I found it difficult because of his writing style. Now that I am older and have more experience with reading and writing, I have come to appreciate his incredible writing style. This appreciation came shortly after when my creative writing class attempted to mimic his writing style and not use adjectives in describing things. I was only able to write one sentence in the five minutes I was given to do the exercise.

          I enjoyed Hemingway’s subtle culture infusions in his writing. He does not state that the story takes place in a Spanish speaking country, but rather reveals it towards the end when the waiters speak party in Spanish, and call each other hombre. I could use these subtle clues in my writing when creating a setting. Instead of stating where the characters are, I could develop clues about where they are, known as showing the readers instead of telling them.

          I enjoyed this reading because I was able to follow the story quite easily but it was still interesting to read. The characters were mysterious and well developed in the short span of the story. However, I was left questioning who the characters were out of context of the cafĂ©, but maybe Hemingway wanted readers to determine that for themselves.

This story convinced me to start trying to read more of Hemingway’s works, because I have a lot to learn from him.

Elizabeth Bishop, Questions Of Travel (Reading Reaction)


This poem brings up the idea of travelling, and why people should travel versus staying home. People travel all over the world to see “rare” sights and objects, but why? While Bishop never tells the reader what to think and allows them to come to the conclusion on the benefits of travelling, this is still a highly effective poem. It left me thinking about why I like to travel. I like to experience new places, cultures, and meet new people, and I would not be able to accomplish this at home.

          Bishop begins her poem with imagery of waterfalls, alluring the reader into wanting to see the waterfall, to experience its beauty. When I read the opening stanza of the poem I thought Bishop was going to encourage readers to travel as often as possible and see as many “waterfalls” as they could, but then she talks about staying at home and imagining the waterfall instead.

          I particularly enjoyed when Bishop seemed to contradict herself when she would describe an image of travel, glorify it, and then ask if it is really necessary to go and see it versus imagining it at home. I could use this technique in my writing to make it more mysterious, by not telling the reader what I want them to think, and allowing them to decide for themselves.

          Questions Of Travel is an effective work, making the reader question what the poem is trying to tell them. Personally, I do not like reading something that tells me what the answer is, which may explain why I enjoy works by Plato. To me, this piece is effective and powerful because it leaves me to determine what the author is trying to say.

Friday, March 8, 2013

My Six Billion Secrets

Hello, my assignment was to write a poem inspired by the website Six Billion Secrets. Below is the post that inspired me, and the work that came from it!


Post:

They say girls always hold grudges to the end.

But when I’m mad at someone for something

I make lists.

I list all the things they do/did to me that make me mad

But it always ends up with me making a list of what makes them such a great person.

We may not be friends but that doesn’t mean I don’t think you’re amazing.

 

Poem:

1) You cheated on me

“Please don’t” was my plea

2) You never call

Never showed up when I was dressed up like a doll

3) I try to talk to you

To ask you why you’re so blue

All you say is “I’m fine”

And I can see that the fault is all mine

 

4) But your kind heart

Sweet as a blueberry tart

5) And then there’s your laugh

I could listen to it

For the length of a game

Or just the first half

 

Ever since our first kiss

It always comes back to this

No matter what you do

I’m still in love with you…